Writing Style: Fantasy Story

Last night when Betty was sleeping she had a strange dream. When Betty woke up, there was something on her bed. It was very furry and pink. When Betty shook it, it moved. Betty was very scared, She shouted loudly. Then she looked at the pink bunny and screamed, “I dreamed about you last night. Are you Bunny?” The furry rabbit nodded its head. Betty asked why she was here and was very surprised when Bunny told her she was bored. The furry rabbit had decided to come and play with Betty! Bunny told Betty she was from Nepture and she was a princess on her planet. Then Betty cried, “Really? I’m a princess, too! I’m so happy to meet another princess.”

The little girl and the bunny played happily for many days. One day after breakfast, Betty asked Bunny to go to the park with her. Then they went for a walk. Suddenly, Betty noticed that nobody could see her best friend, Bunny! Betty took out her cell phone camera and snapped a picture, but when she looked at the camera screen she didn’t see Bunny. She only saw a ragged old stuffed toy. Betty felt very sad. Bunny made Betty happy. Before Bunny arrieved, Betty had been very lonely. She didn’t have many friends and she didn’t like to say anything to anyone. But after Bunny had arrived, Betty had started talking to her parents and having fun. Bunny was Betty’s best friend. Why couldn’t anyone else see her? Betty was very sad.

Then one day, Bunny’s family came to Earth. They were looking for Bunny. They showed Bunny’s picture to everyone because they wanted to bring her home. By then, Bunny had been with Betty for five years. Her family hadn’t seen her in a long time. They found Bunny in Betty’s house. They told Betty they wanted to take Bunny back to Nepture. When Betty found out, she told Bunny. Then Betty cried. She didn’t want Bunny to go back. Then Bunny cried, too.

After a few days, Betty gave Bunny a cell phone and told her to call anytime. Betty wanted Bunny’s family to be happy,so she let Bunny go back to Nepture. Bunny told Betty she would come back as soon as possible.

Two years later, Betty woke up early one morning and saw Bunny. She grabbed Bunny and ran out of her bedroom. On her door, it said, “Betty and Bunny’s Bedroom.” Betty said, “I knew you would come back here some day!” Bettty was going to study hard because she wanted to be the best princess in the world. Bunny told Betty she wouldn’t go back to Nepture. She had let her older sister be princess of her planet. After that, Bunny and Betty were always happy everyday. Betty became a good princess. Their parents were both proud of them.

You never know. Maybe there’s a furry rabbit in your bedroom right now! And maybe, she could be a princess. For sure, she’ll be your friend.